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| Silver Ice 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really good poem. I like how you gradually went through to explain the problem and how in the end the "because I'm thin now" was a lie. Excellent job, keep on writing! Can't wait to read more. |
| Gabrielle Rentz 2003-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg kelly that was the best and so touching you are a great writer and i can see now y you got so many dang A+'s! |