 bubublacz 2009-09-07 . chapter 19Nice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.
And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.
And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick **, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt. |
 bubublacz 2009-09-07 . chapter 7I'm getting excited by the turn of events! |
 bubublacz 2009-09-06 . chapter 1OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good! |
 Elmo'z BFF 2009-04-23 . chapter 20 finally finished it!! awesomeness
n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months?? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months?? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...?? |
 Elmo'z BFF 2009-04-22 . chapter 17 holy **!
Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it??
good bloodi job :D |
 Zainab 2009-04-21 . chapter 4 story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...? |
 Elmo'z BFF 2009-04-21 . chapter 1 whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!! |
 charmante-x3 2009-03-27 . chapter 19OMFG... that was freaking AWESOME. I read ur story in 2 days... and didn't get anything else done. Your story was SO addictive. I loved the story. I loved the characters. I loved the twist. I loved the ending. basically, I LOVED EVERYTHING. Great work =) |
 kaw97 2009-01-08 . chapter 1Just a note that you mistakenly say "On the night of his sister’s wedding, Cole Wickham would die."
I think you meant the night of his sister's anniversary.
I just finished Noah's story (and loved it!) and am really looking forward to this one.
Keep writing! |
 akaCHEEKS 2008-08-24 . chapter 19i was interested in the whole twisted minds bit thing. |
 reader 2008-07-13 . chapter 17 !
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 reader 2008-07-13 . chapter 17 WOW. W.T.F. OMG |
 reader 2008-07-13 . chapter 12 OH, SHITCAKES, that's bad. |
 reader 2008-07-13 . chapter 7 I feel INCREDIBLY sorry for Cole. |
 reader 2008-07-13 . chapter 6 AHH, so many lies! It's going to SUCK when the ** hits the fan. |