Nice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.

And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.

And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick **, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt.

I'm getting excited by the turn of events!

OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good!

finally finished it!! awesomeness
n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months?? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months?? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...??

holy **!
Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it??
good bloodi job :D

story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...?

whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!!

OMFG... that was freaking AWESOME. I read ur story in 2 days... and didn't get anything else done. Your story was SO addictive. I loved the story. I loved the characters. I loved the twist. I loved the ending. basically, I LOVED EVERYTHING. Great work =)

Just a note that you mistakenly say "On the night of his sister’s wedding, Cole Wickham would die."
I think you meant the night of his sister's anniversary.

I just finished Noah's story (and loved it!) and am really looking forward to this one.

Keep writing!

i was interested in the whole twisted minds bit thing.

!
:DD

WOW. W.T.F. OMG

OH, SHITCAKES, that's bad.

I feel INCREDIBLY sorry for Cole.

AHH, so many lies! It's going to SUCK when the ** hits the fan.