vivid poem. very powerful

Car rides, and strawberry moons.D.

wow..that is really awsome.

grand. truly grand.

You have a writing style all of your own, which is almost incredible. I love the title, and the actual poem was amazing.

"my skin was not my own

but rather

a lose canon of raspberry lips,

and pink flesh meant to stand by you."

Those were my favorite lines.

This poem is so beautiful in so many different ways... I'm awed.

Fantastic job.

And BTW, I adore your pen name.