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| Mechelle James. 2006-06-21 ch 4,  | abusecool story. i can relate to it. |
| karmakaze 2004-06-11 ch 3, | abuseI love this story, and I will review the next chapter, but I have to go to work. |
| Nina Wyndia 2004-06-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseBah, love... people would... do better without it... |
| assenders 2004-02-21 ch 1, | abuseok, ill tell u this, im not a big fan of the whole yuri/yoai thing, but since this is fiction, hey i'll give it a break and since im a guy it isnt quite disturbing i only hate fanfic cuz most of it is about people who arent already gay so it insults these people, but anyway, cute fic in away i always rounded what are some the ways people turn out gay or lez |
| Food For Thought 2003-10-18 ch 1, | abuseWell, well, well... Look who's movin' on up!! I figured since you've kept me going by reviewing my work, the least I could do is review something of yours. I love this story so far, it starts off very pure and innocent, then it gradually escalates into a situation where Josie gets involved in deeper issues. I have a question though, "Did Josie discover that she liked girls in the fourth grade or before then?" I hope to get the answer to that when I continue reading. Good luck with this one! P.S. Oh, I hope I that I played some "minor" role in how this story turned out. When I saw the name "Gutierrez", a smile found its way to my face. Let's just hope that Josie doesn't flip out like "Cristina" did (Merciless: The Prequel). Lol. ** This message was made possible by a grant from Xantek Productions!! ** |
| SicksisterSam 2003-09-17 ch 2, | abusehey chicka! Way way WAY good I like that I hope you keep it up!Way good! I love you stuff too! Thanks for all the reviews!! Sorry I havn't been such a good reviwer as you but your stuff is good ttyl laters! ~Sam |
| karmakaze 2003-09-07 ch 2, | abuseSo, this is a true story? Neat:) I like how you showed it starting as the other girls became interested in boys, and you show how you felt. Please update:) |
| Yaquel Visain 2003-09-05 ch 2, | abuse-tilts her head to the side thoughtfully- Well, it is most interesting. Girls that rant about guys all the time are very annoying.. and I must agree that women have much prettier bodies than men. *drools, then sucks it back up* One of my sayings is "I wish I had a nice little goth guy with firm woman breasts..." It seems I'm almost serious sometimes. I'm probably just confused/disturbed. -passes out gender-bending cookies- |
| Calatra 2003-08-20 ch 2, | abuseI like the flow of your story, the only thing that bothers me is the way you break off from the flow of the story to discribe what everyone looks like. I think it kind of throws the story off a bit, but other then that, it's fine. |
| Calatra 2003-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI guess I can understand a little about what you're going through. I'm bi, myself and no one close to me knows. ::sighing:: |
| Rosie Seifuku 2003-08-18 ch 1, | abusethis looks very promising...you might want to hone in on some more details, maybe develop the character some more. your plot line is strong, keep going, im curious... |
| Dream and Write 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuseVery good, I like how you've put it together. Keep writing and see ya soon. |
| OJW 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abuseHmm this was interesting! It was good and honest. Can't wait to hear more! |