AWW >

:'( :'(
So sad...
so beautiful...

It moved me... so sad and yet sweet...

ARGH! I'm startign to sound demented...

GREAT story Dory...

Luv:
~Carol~

Wow, I really don't know what to say. This story is beautiful! It's sad, in an aching sort of way, but still amazing.

Oh wow... *stares* That was.. absolutely incredible.. wow.. I don't even know how to describe it. But you described everything perfectly.. having a love for the piano myself, you described exactly the feelings that come with playing a favorite piece and losing yourself in the music.. and the transition between what went on at home and what was going on at school was perfect. It's amazing. Absolutely amazing. Wonderful job.

nice fic.. plenty of emotion and u write great fics.

nice angst fic dorz...

DnS

Wow, that was awesome, with how it was cutting back and forth, i could picture it like a movie. Down right amazing, really.

I like the fragmentation in this part. You hand us all the pieces of the puzzle, but we have to do the job ourselves in the end, make it fit. You could work it out some more, but I don't think that's really necessary... and it might take some of the vague clarity away, so I don't know.

(About "Beyond Stories Untold": have you seen Thelma & Louise, that movie with Susan Sarandon and Geena Davis? Well, in the end they drive off a cliff, so that's about all there is to it. Maybe not the best line to end with, but it sounded OK at that time.)