nice.

better than me... though all my poetry was writen a year or two ago, i'm posting it it's called: a child's collection of poems.

I like this poem...it's got a nice rhyme and feel too it. Great job.

If it isn't too much trouble could you please reveiw my work.

Wow...really good poem. The rhyming fits, and adds the perfect accent to the poem.
~*Tigress Moon