A bit of an unexpected ending, in my mind at least, but I liked it. Not everything's all happy and perky and well yes, it's nice to read something that is more accurate or life like?? Maybe...maybe I should stop trying to think today. I just had an urge to randomly review everything I read today and thus, here I am. I love the way you spelt the name Zach. Normally, I see it 'Zack'. Obviously this is relevant...in that completely irrelevant kind of way of course. Well, ciao for now, again.

I shivered when I read that. I cried a bit too. I think you're going on my favourite authour's list, I absolutely love your stuff.

oh OW!

*whimper* That made my heart hurt. Aw... u made me kinda not want to write angst fiction ever again...

but u know thats not gonna happen, lol.

Aw. Truly magnificent writing doll.

Luffly. Absolutely Brilliant

Coldplay. Mhm. This is goodness, continue continue!

I love it ^-^. It's really really good.

Okay, anyone that reviews one of my romance stories with the word "Aw," deserves AS MANY REVIEWS AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE. They start right now.
This is a really good beginning, I really liked it. I'm going to put this on my favorites list and read the rest of the chapters later. And remember- updates are your friend!
BTW, I start school Monday, day before you. Blech. I'm going to be in 10th. I have three reports to write in the first week and in Biology we begin with the sexual reproduction of flowers.
Something tells me I'm going to have to sneak a good Jean Genet or Jim Grimsley in between the textbook ;)
Keep writing!
-Prozac Nation

I like it so far but please update this soon! I need to know what happens. Please, I like it a lot. And I love Zach.