very funny!

keep it up lucifer!

mind master.

You know about sarah cox? Are you british?! A british writer on this site apart from myself and incubabe? No way!

YAY!! I LOVE THE RHYMINGS OF THE FIVE ANIMALS!
HOORAY!!

hehehe. Its funni i'll give u tht ;)

this is not a review as it is my work but i wold just like to say that the comment Sufo made was totally out of order. i wrote this for a laugh. it is not ment to be taken seriousley. it is for fun. i had 5 minuets free and i sat down and wrote! wht shold i have written a Shakespearen sonet? did i have enough time? this was fun! so suck an egg!

lucifer

the monkey crows like a hat cat bat mat fat lat rat at suckmydickat you are the monkeys king but we ned more monkeys! more more more hah aha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha cheese loving cat king! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha monkey