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| Identity 2004-02-15 ch 1,   | this is a wonderful poem. nothign is too long or too short or too wordy or not wordy enough. wonderful piece. |
| Seras Nova 2003-09-07 ch 1, | A little strange with wording, but generalyl a good poem. Nice work. -Seras |
| laerai 2003-08-23 ch 1, | I like how you make a contrast every sentence... I do like how you ended it. It puts all the other things into perspective... |
| simpleplan13 2003-08-18 ch 1, | Wow thats an amazing poem! |
| nimue webweaver 2003-08-18 ch 1, | im speachless |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Wow! I love all your poems, and this one is no exception! I really like those last lines. I like how you wrote everthing, really. Awesome work, keep writing. |