My total attention was on the story. Fiztazztic (fantastic in the language of Drunks).

I liked it, loved it, up till the 8th chapter.

Here's a Rundown:

Great story overall, Harmoney's way unique, yeah, cheers to that.

Harry wouldn't just become Jake's friend again in a snap after he'd seen him kissing a guy.

I don't *want* Harmoney to be bisexual! He should be with Jake!!

Yeah, well, um *cough cough* I guess I have shown where I stand. Good day, I'm off to colour my walls with green highlighter.

PS: My army of rabid weasels wants Jake and Harmoney to be together to. If you catch my drift. *hint hint*

Alright ^^' I just read chapter one, and I have a hunch that Harmony is a girl. So great job so far! I'll keep reading!

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE!! Christ this is such a totally kl story it's the best i've read in ages. Harmony is so sweet and i love Jake bless him he's just confused. And i don't wont Harmony to like this other girl, he shuld love Jake and only Jake goddamnit. UPDATE SOON... or i may have to kill myself.

HOLY ** MAN
UP-DATE
THIS IS THE BEST!
HARMONY I SO CUTE!!
AND SWET!
UP-DATE PLEASE
PLEASE
RIGHT
NOW
I LOVE THI STORY
AND YES IT IS GOOD
~COOKIE~
NOW!

i like it i love it and i want some more of it ^^ update soon!

aw, this is cute. i love Harmony, he's so innocent and adorable, i want to read more! update soon!

This story kinda confused me a bit...i keep waiting for Harmony to turn to a girl..but i guess he is just a pretty boy...@_@ so confused. oh well, this is very good please write more once ur out of writer's block, i'm in it myself, must be contagious..hehe. Keep it up!

MUST NEEd MORE!

hey, cool stroy so far, cant wait to read some more chapters,will Jake and Harmony get it back to gether or what?!?!?! BUBBAI!

this story pleases me...although i wish jake would work out his issues with/out/ dragging harmony through hell in a nail-studded barrel (fairy tales for ya). i love the gender-bending names of harmony's family. they make me smile.
i really like janice. she'd be an amazing friend...except for the whole love interest thing. that's gonna put a cramp in jake's style. or maybe kick his butt into gear. :evil grin: (he needa a good, sound kicking.)

update soon, ne?

ps. i know i don't make sense, and it's rather past my bedtime, but you get the jist, right? i like this story, i hope you continue it...and post again quickly...all clear? :grin: good. i thank you, for i shall go to bed happy tonight. ^_^

hey i really think your story is cool. just wondering is jake gay? anyway hope youll finish it. good luck

Whee! About time I got to read another chapter. Janice better not make things too difficult, or I just might slap her. Nice job! *thumbs up*

I absolutely love this story. Its very beautifully written and I like the entire plot. Overall, Lovely...

Please hurry and get another chapter up, I really like this.

ooh!
it gets better
i like the intro of janice(she seems sweet) but harmony and jake MUST be together!
>_