A humorous romp in snack food. Wee!

LOL! That was good! =D

LOL That's great! Hehe. I would take out one or two of the fwahahas, tho. In a strange way, that is actually one of the most cheery poems I've seen in a while.

What? You mean marshmallows don't like being roasted? Aw-- now I'll feel so guilty every time I have them! ... unless of course it's one that wanted to enslave me and my planet... but... I dunno- I've been referred to as marshmallow, so my loyalties are confused:)

Okee-dokee then... The first part reminds me of Doctor Suess on crack. Don't ask. It's very funny though, and very senseless. Loads of fun! Woot.

:) This is so cute, and kool and i love it :) Keep up the good work :)

PS: Thanx for Reviewing my writing

Can't wait to see what you do to chocolate chip cookies. Okay, this was funny but seemed a bit incongruous...the first bit, the one that sounded like a bunch of newspaper headlines (that's what I thought of) could have easily stood alone. Anyway. For a funny little poem, it's good...for a poem poem, it's a bit off. Still. Whee. Murderous marshmallows. *pokes at them* You'd never think spun sugar would be so spiteful...gah, now I'M alliterating!!

yay! I love it! So imaginative. I wrote something about desserts before called 'Last Course' but it wasn't just about desserts. This is great stuff! Puts a smile on my face and I have the biggest craving for a campfire marshmallow fest.

Alright you and Lale need to hand over the sugar..gosh. anyway interesting, i wouldnt use fwahahaha though..

wow... i hope you're near me when them marshmallows take over... plz R&R my stuff lol

I LOVE IT!