I'm sorry for reviewing twice in the same night, but I saw the Rooney lyrics (Nothing but a bitch on strings) and had to see. I'm glad I did.

"Your hips,

Your milky hips, those loving lips,

Oh, Lord please help me,

From overstaying my welcome,"

Very, very good.

I love the way you structured this, it seems to get the point across very well. Great stuff (: keep writing!