oh my.beautiful.

my favorite stanza is the second to last.

*desperately adds to fav list*

~`*`~the Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon

Aw i like this one, filled with emotion, and sounds so relevent 2 me...but anyway, good work!
*~Rachel~*

Marvelously written. And it's not one of those poems that HAVE to rhyme. In my book, that's a good thing.

aw...i'm pretty sure this one is perfect...
later

that was really good. sad yet true.
~Fish

I can actually see huge, sharp, and lethal black thorns rising out of a carefully tended garden. Like in a fairy tale.

The stanzas were all artfully delivered and the last line powerful.

[^_^ I read it a couple times.]

A turbulent dangerous poem with the beauty of a fairy tale. Reminds me of The Phantom of the Opera, my all-time favorite story. Very nice. Keep it up.

Interesting concept, nicely executed...yet another wonderful piece. I esp. like the fourth stanza.

~lyv

~ This is very sad. But still, there's a lesson.


c. butterfly~**

So great! The way you portray everything is amazing!

§ julia §

simply beautiful i liked this one a lot

incredibly well-written...

Beautiful write. Great stuff.

This hit the core of my soul. Most people don't hit it that often. One of the most beautiful poems ever written.

Please keep writing.

-Seras

This is beautiful...very touching and heartwarming...I love this...