That's just what I needed to read right now and I'm glad I did. It's written realy well too.

Amazing!

The message of this poem is beautifully displayed, and very true. I love your last line-- "Let go of that excuse to avoid the future." Beauty in truth, huh? We wouldn't have the one without the other, after all.

What can I say? I was beyond impacted by the beauty of this poem and its message. I recently came to the conclusion that this poem talks about when it comes to my life. The past is something to let go of. Wonderful in all iis glory.

this was so true

now i really want to let go.

~ You really have great ideas. Your words are very inspiring and beautiful. Keep it up.


c. butterfly~**

*Stops dancing to RHCP* *Looks at reviews* *Gasps* Oh me thought me reviewed this! O_O

I love the repetitiveness on the last stanza! ^_^

And in the first one, the last two lines are way too familiar to me, I'm guilty of doing that when walking through town...hehe...*Flashback* *Girl walks leaving her neck and head behind looking at shop window* *Falls over*

All in all one of your darker pieces but still as amazingly beautiful as every other piece! ^_^

Love Always and God Bless!

- Nicole xx

WOW! that was amazing, certainly something i've been guilty of... loved the line "Live in the past and paint it beautiful" that should be in a song man! liked the ending too...

xbearx

So wonderful! I wish I had even an infinitesimal fraction of the talent you do. You're such a great poetess! You should get published. I'm serious. I've read a lot of great poetry, and this is definitely part of it. Keep writing!

§ julia §

wow, nice... it paints a good a picture. lovely poem ^_^

i love this poem! such a great message that we should all learn to follow.

Oh wow, this is amazing work, brilliant job!

Strong message, and beautifully conveyed! I adore the way you word things!
~God bless~

those are some easy things to say btu not so easy to do. Good message, just wish it was easier to follow.

Wow, the feeling is incredible. There, you just did it again! You've amaze me once more!