Good job, best play I've read yet. YOu coule elaborate alot on the dicusion between the note being read and the desion in the end such as more of her reason and more of his. God work.

Reine Faye.

Wow... this is marvelous... I'd love to see this performed. Any chance of acting this out? ;) No really, excellent work. No joke; you've got an incredible talent.