short but oh-so-sweet!

summerdazed

*Smiles* I really love this. It's not something you commonly see in a romance poem, but you executed it perfectly. Awesome, awesome job. :o)

Very beautiful with a great rhythm.

Heart of the Sword

This is excellent and somehow beautiful.

wow, that was very sweet!

Hehe. Just responding to your review from Inside the Twisted Mind of my Guinea Pig...I live all the way in Washington D.c. Yes, I'm one of those strange American ppl...

neways. love the poem. keep writing.

:-D

O yah and you're on my favorite authors list, I hope that's okay.

thats good but the ending is kinda shot... need to write more onto it