Great!

I say this possibly because I like vampire related stuff.

Just watch the spelling on the summary...

well being somewhat of a poet myself i have to say that was pretty good for someone of your age lacking in experience in life.

i think certain parts of this poem should be reviewed and revised. i thin some parts could be emphasized and elaborated on.

may you go on to find your fortune in this way (or marry avril lavigne lol)

mind master.

hey...i really like this besty out of all your poems...its really very good..keep writign! love and good luck.Twilight

this poem was much better! i esspecially enjoy the way you rym! i think you swtyle is like a yong Borsyth the russian poet!

keep it up i think you could go places lucky you!

this was a monkeytastic poem! i really enjoyed it and thought it was great! only not very surreal! it needs more surrealisum! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha cheese! cat bat

GREAT rhythm, really fantastic stuff, amazing. Like I've said before to people I don't like to advertise my stuff but it reminds me of a poem I wrote called "Inviting for a biting" I guess because of the vampire thing lol..haha i'm also writing a story called High Noon about the bloodsuckers too. Just a thought.