love it, love it, and love it for a third time :D. the only thing i can remember i've found are a few kind of similar places--when the girls were getting out of the cell and also when Brian was rescuing Banning and the two others. it was a little unclear how they got away without being seen/caught. other than that, it was great :).
i apologise for not keeping up with this story as i should have, but i definately love it!

lol why must you have all the telent of writing?!?!RAWR! ok, just kidding, but this is seriously the best chapter yet. Ah, on day my friend, you will be a famous writer and i will be like I KNEW HER WHEN SHE WAS 17 SO BAGH! *umm yeah im alright :)* All righty talk to yah later get on aim cuz i wanna talk to you!
Luvs,
Kathyrn

Wow, Brian kicks **! Great job!

Promising, I really like it so far, Brian is awesome, and its true, it is not like Pirates of the Caribbean, though that was awesome in a different way, lol. Great start! : )

there were some run-on sentences, but other than that, i liked it :)

hey. 'tis Rachel :)
i'm really enjoying reading this...and can't believe you only have two reviews so far! i'd have to say this is definately better than Pirates of the Carribean on several points. the all-girl, **-kicking crew has got me hooked [;D]. their accents are a nice touch, and the whole irish thing is pretty cool for some odd reason ^^. i dunno. but it's great.
maybe when i find something wrong, i'll be able to write a real review lol ;).
keep writing!

this is really good! i like the all-women crew thing :D. keep it up, you got a reader ;).

WHOAH! Really good pirate story. With chicks as the main characters! Very unlikely but very good. Please FINISH IT! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Write, write, write! This one is going on my fave stories list.

~Siran Awel