does this come naturally or what? jeez yet another awesome poem!

hi! Thought this was quite a nice poem. I'm not much of a poet but I liked how you described what happened slowly before you gave a rather abrupt end. A nice way to bring about the theme of memories but I thought it could have had a little more depth. Overall, it's a nice poem. Continue writing!:)

You have so much stuff here! I don't have time to read it all... but this caught my eye because I have something with the same name, so I wanted to compare.
That was touching... just wondering if you wrote that on a whim, or if it came from personal experiances...

This was beautiful, I loved the twist in the middle and the subsequent ending. Keep up the good work :)
*cosmo-queen*

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