I really loved the choice of words and the short line style you used in this poem. It was very touching.

Brilliant poem.

~Twilight Starr~

Sad and sweet.

Wow.. umm.. Speachless?? heh. Thats very very very very magnificent. What else can I say.. Your poetry is wonderful, and it manages to take my breath away every time. This time it did so in a most abnormal way, but still none the less. Yeah, Im a die-hard romantic, so I just die when I see this stuff. a.. Anyway.. when I get more free time, away from the devils of education, I promise to read "The Dark Side of The Moon" because I've been meaning to, just no time to be able to. Im sure its wonderful, according to this poem.

wow these poems are good. all of them seem to be about lost loves though. keep up the good work

this is sad, beautiful.

i didn't even know you wrote a poem to go w/the story! *stupid me..*
i realy like this one, since, its like it can describe so much... in so little... okay... i'm not making too much sense...but oh wel
god job!
-MandaZ

I wish i could write like you! Gosh-this poem was one of the best I've read! Great job!

wow...that was incredible, beautiful, powerful, shoking, tearjerking, statrling, powerful, amazing. wow. i loved it. possibly one of the best love poems i've ever read. wow... seriously, it was briliant. i'm still gasping in awe