its good i guess, not a personal favorite

lol, sry i find this so funny..go figure, but i love your style...its really good. love and good luck, Mia

this was ok! for you that is bad! we want the sureal lucifer we are used to! plese go back to that! for me! my master i bow at your feet! make me laugh again!

Love the rhythm and the end of it is great, just a couple typos i hope you don't mind me pointing out like 'one' in the last paragraph i assume is supposed to be 'won' but it doesn't really matter cos the poem's great!
Starlight Maiden ~

this was an interresting poem indeed! but why is it about a vamipre hunter? it should of been about the vampire! and what happened to the sack of bones? apart fromthis it was rather good keep it up!