umm, i am competely lost. could you explain the whole morphing thing in the first chapeter and the whole "men in black" theme? plus, whats up with the principal giving them this really expensive triaing thingy and destroying their records. why do they want the records destroyed? why will the principle do it? can u explain more. you can start in the middle of things, but this is too in the middle. how did they meet? i have too many questions, i'll e-mail them to one of your many e-mail adresses.

Hey, that was pretty cool...I like the plot alot..the fight scenes were okay. They should've been longer and more detailed, but besides that it was cool..Good job!!

By the way, could you please read and review one of my stories, "Expensive Bounty". Thanks!!

-He who shows No Mercy

"...Wow, tough glass..."
~"...It's supposed to be--it's an 'Everlast'."
Lol, like the previous chapter, good stuff. ^_^

Oye...
...I'm going to have nightmares of you being all giddy, joking about the friendship line...lol! Anywho, t'was good; me off to next chapter!

Very good story. I like how Josh and Veronica have their own colors when they are fighting. Do the other three guys have colors too? Do they have these colors as a result of their training as fighters or because they are super-natural? I like your style. Keep writing.

As i sed in my other review.. you are so good... keep writing so i can keep reading... :)