I love the message in your poem because its really true. People never seem to realize the effect even a small action can make. I like how you ended your poem: 'Is this what you wanted?Well, you made it happen.'

Great work!

Wow, i like this one too. You're really talented.

This was awesome, and so true. Really great, I'm so glad our time on earth is limited, I don't want to live through this...