Sane is an adjective i believe. but besides that that was really good but quite a strange assignment i must admit. thanks for reviewing my poem... I'm glad you liked it... be sure to check out some of my other stuff
~Lauren

This was really awesome! I like the way yo compare life of humans to life of animals. Keep up the good work.

Good work, even if you didn't win. :D

well i didnt win! *sniff sniff tear tear* but i did get an honorable mention. better than nothing huh?

Wow. Nicely done, especially without adjectives. Be sure to shout if you win...

~He Who Walks On All Fours

neat ^_^

~Arayuldawen~

i thought i found some adjectives... but maybe i'm crazy and they were just adverbs. are those allowed? the ones that i found were: lazily, hotly, and selfishly. adverbs? i know nothing about my own language!
anyhow, i liked it. i like all your stuff n_n

wow, touching, heartfelt lil story...

I love it! It's very discriptive without being discriptive... if that makes any sence at all ::smile:: I loved it!