Wow. This is great. I love the rhyme scheme and the general lay-out of the words.
Fantastic and Brilliant.

Beautiful, once again. wonderful imagery.. great diction. what else can I say? It was perfect! Keep it up!

Kimmie

Excellent ! One of my favorite poems on Fiction Press.

i tryed to quote my favourite part but cant...i love it all.

the start was a bit.. but after that you really took off (no pun intended)i bow before your skill and nod sagely at your sentiments.

Wow...really, really impressive. And to think you, complimented my writing, haha. I'll take that as an honor. Very well written, flows smoothly, nice rhyming pattern..and just a beautiful poem...love the use of adjectives and describing words.