ready to update?

interesting. update soon.

Interesting chapter...I wonder what exactly Ellelarna has to do with the other woman, and suspense makes me wnat to read more of it, so update!

~sam

Ooh I love it! Still can't get over how much your fantasy style of writing is like mine though, but with different ideas. We must have read the same books in childhood to get the same vocabulary =P

Awsome, loved it. I love your culture building. All the points of view really make it interesting, I hope you keep writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Nice intro, captures ones attention. I'm glad you descided to continue the story (seeing as how you said you weren't sure at the begining of this) I'll keep reading, hope the rest is as good as this.

Intrigues me...Please update

brilliant story. i hope you update soon. i'd write a longer review, but i'm fallin' asleep here at my desk.. *yawns* i put you on my alert list

I've enjoyed it so far, I can't wait for the next chapter...

Hehe, awesome chapter. 'Comrade' works well. :p *twitches as she notices the tiniest grammar error* Damn, missed a couple! Ah well.Your summary needs a re-write.

Yay, I waited a while for this one. I really like this chapter and how you introduced the new characters.

It's nice to see girl power! I love your story because I've never read where so many species are in one story, it's a very nice change. Make sure you put commas around names when the characters are referring to the person they're talking to in the dialogue. I expect an update very soon!

goodgood!

I love your writing!! Pleas add more to the story soon!

intresting, update soon