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| Werecat99 2004-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI stand speechless. This is quite amazing, with very original metaphors and expressions. I loved it, of course. |
| ittybittytreefrog 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHeehee. A Harry Potter romance poem. Sounds like something Ginny would write. Er... Only better. Um, never mind. Nice poem. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abusegorgeous descriptions |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseYou seriously have an incredible way with words. They sound absolutely breathtaking. By the way, I'm HP-obsessed too! |
| Bohemian Muse 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseOnly a true HP fan can appreciate this poem. (And being a Dan Radcliffe lover doesn't hurt, either.) I love the wording. Something about it screams passion and lust and love and yearning and dreaming and recieving. It's amazing. Keep up the good work. |
| RaeneofFaeries 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was deep, yeah. I like 'til dawn unoods it's light' a lot, really cool imagery |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseKinda wordy, but I get the point. A good girl always goes for the bad boy. However did you mean to rhyme "idle" with "kindle" cuz they don't really rhyme. |
| Jupiter's Tears 2003-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem. It's so beautifully written! You have an amazing way with words that I don't come by very often. So I want to thank you for posting your works on fp.net! |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is...just amazing! There is absolutely your best piece yet! It's so brilliant that I'm tempted to add this into my fav. list, and I think I will too. |
| Artemis Astralstar 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, im writing a fic at the moment, and this rings very true. well written, well doine, keep it up. |
| Seras Nova 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseVERY good word choices. I loved it and keep up the good work. -Seras |
| Mime 2003-09-02 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was definately one the of best love poems I have EVER read on this site. Great job! I'm adding you and this piece to my fav. authors/stories list. Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: Http://w.helpfindprincessmulan.0catch.com. Your help will be greatly appreciated! |
| Seri v. 2.01 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's all I can say, for I am speechless. |
| thaiswirl 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abusewhat can i say this is an awesome poem and i enjoyed reading it .. keep it up! |
| simpleplan13 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWow.. that's an amazing poem... Its just wow... thanks for the review |