Beautiful! I really liked it, keep writing!
DuelDragon

That is beautiful. I find it interesting you used ravens, since they are usually birds of ill omen . . . Haunting and lovely. Take a bow.

That had the feeling of an epic lost in time. Loved the image of the ravens, as well as the loneliness one can feel, especially near the end of the poem.

Good work, as always.

*Growl* Stupid FPcom...