Perfect rhythm ... very musical to read. Very beautiful, love the repetition of the title in each stanza. It all makes the Pegesus so much more beautiful to me now!

Wonderful poem! I love the imagery.

This is wonderful! I really like it. You captured the beauty of the creature and the love of the creator for it. It has a very pleasing tone to it. Keep up the great work!=)

This was one beautiful poem. I loved the way it was told in a tender, loving tone. And the elements used in this creation were very nicely selected, fit to the beauty of the creature.

A joy to read, as always.

*grunt* Stupid FPcom *growl*

oh, wow, this one is REALLY good, limyaael. the imagery is so well-written; i can just picture the images of the poem in my head. i think the description of the pegasus in the second stanza is very well written. i can't wait to read more poetry from you!

Wow... It's a great poem! Your rhyming doesn't get in the way of the flowing of words; instead, it boosts the glory of it.