I though this poem was very touching. It's a unique idea. Continue with your talent

W00t! Dwarves ROCK. *nodnod* Pun intended.

Guess what? FPcom has the hiccups again. I can't upload so I read.

Anyway, this poem was cute and unexpected. Of course, you are right. But the dawrven love life usually evades the inspiration of the poets.

And this one was fitting to the dawrven spirit. The images of the mines and the depths of the earth were beautiful. I'd like to know more about their story, though. Why were they apart by law?

In any case, I really liked it.

I am very, VERY jealous of the talent show in this poetry.

Dwarves are always shunned by most fantasy writers (superficial creeps). I am glad to find something relate to dwarves and romance!