Hey! I really really like this poem, it rhymes well and has a very nice feel. I like the idea that you're supposed to be over it but you're not, and that maybe it's not supposed to be over, that it's not supposed to be alright. Keep writing your wonderful poems, and thanks for you reviews of mine! Lots of love!

Keep Writing!

- Karma

damn straight! i know exactly how you feel, and have gone through the same thing once, and am going through it once again right now...*huggles* i feel your pain...and your words have brought meaning to my mind...good work...do keep it up

*jules*

Hey! I really love all your poems! To explain my poem (good enough?)...after re-reading it, I realized I didn't get my point across at all (egh). It was directed toward my parents. See, I'm one of those loser over-achieving kids that hasnt even missed the bus once in their lives...and somehow, when i come home 5 minutes late, its a good enough reason to slap me around the head and ground me for a month. So, basically, it was directed at my parents, and how even though I'm pretty damn good, I'll never be good enough.

Now this one I have had happened. I had to save thier marrige and still they put me through hell!

Wow that was awesome my parents just split up after school ended hey i'm not alone ^0^ awesome poem ^-^ i'll be back

Bye

SMiley Smiley

wicked good poem. its real and raw and u give a lot of ur emotion into it .. kinda like how i like to do in my poems. so check some of my stuff out lata

sorry bout what happened *hugs punky* great poem keep writing bout this raw emotion, it works

This is a sad but great poem,I'm very sorry about what happened. Thanks for the review



p.s. i made a new story on humor it's called moon the moon

I like this poem. It was really insightful

aw...i feel 4 u. i can't kno exactly wut ur goin thru but i can rel8 b/c my parents r on da brink of divorce. i'd rather they divorce than con't 2 b married b/c it'd b a lot less painful dat way. but of course, when parents divorce, they somehow fail 2 consider children part of da equation. 1