I LOVE IT!
Chapters need to be longer! (jk) Maybe go mare in depth with your characters? I know its only chapter one, just a suggestion. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

i uber think that you should keep going with this. its really cute! plz plz plz keep going! although, i think that there should be a kiss in the next chapter. X3

ohh, I LIKE this story!! I love the cute little cat demon, I absolutly adore cats! MORE please, MORE! Pretty Please With A Cherry On Top??
Lee

"Where did you learn? You taught you?"
(?)
do you mean "..who taught you ?"

well...
the one thing that could be better...
IS IF YOU UPDATED!!
haha
yes i like this story
so can you update? mmk? ok!

Pretty.I am excitedly awaiting more.:3

I must admit, I have a great weakness for pleasure slave stories. By the heavens, I love them. I also love Neko/Cat boys. I hope you can find time and inspiration to update.

It was wonderful! I love the ideas and the storyline.

Liked it a lot, really twisted my chest to read it. Wolud be interesting to see what happens - maybe not so much about what happens outside Koyuki, but inside of him. I simply love these 'abused person gets treated well'- stories, and you are a good writer.I know it was long since you posted it so I won't hope to much - but... a little?

45pwjyoemrth.

WRITE MORE DAMN YOU.

this looks interesting update again soon

ah.. i love it!! i love cats. cats kick but!! yup yup.
^.^

Grr, dumb fp people maked me sign out to review... ANYWAY WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE? *pokepoke* It's VERY GOOD, I demand an update!
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Please?

Aww... is sweet. Only not really. The customs are kind of disturbing, but I've read worse, and I really like where I think this story is going.

:D Wooh, yeah, that was good!! ^^ Aww, I love them both. :D Koyuki is so cute and adorable! @.@ I can't wait until you update this! ^^ I'm so happy right now! :D Yaay, hurry! ^^ Yaay!