Reviews for Now That You're Gone

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ben 2003-10-26 ch 1, anon.	abusedang, that is hecka good. i never knew u could write like that. it is amazing
Xi 2003-10-22 ch 10,	abusei wasn't aware of the fact that i didn't review this chapter... innocent look so sorry! anyways... i liked the ending for this one... ^_^ -MandaZ
BIOfury 2003-10-05 ch 10, anon.	abuseyeah, i think its safe to say that you've got me hooked now. Its really good and i like it alot. Keep up the good work!
Xi 2003-09-03 ch 9,	abuseHeyy, I know I already read the chapter, but it's rude not to leave a review! Soo... as you know, I love the story... and I still can't wait for more... What are you gonna do to Eden? -MandaZ
BIOfury 2003-08-26 ch 8, anon.	abuseWow. I enjoyed reading this a lot. You're an amazing writter. I dont have any suggestions or anything, but i just wanted to tell you that this is really really good. I miss you so much
Xi 2003-08-25 ch 8,	abusewhat?! i dont get it... he just... came back!? how is that humanly possible? is she insane or something?! gasp sry if i don't review really soon... my teachers suk this yr, and i have hw on the FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL! mad face anywayz... UPDATE SOON! -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-24 ch 7,	abusedid you really think i wouldn't review?! you really didn't need to write that WHOLE para on reviewing... since i ALWAYZ review...right?! anywayz... it was so sad... how could she be so cruel... (i know i said that... but... still)...so cruel as to... HURT Eden's feelings?! how DARE she!? kino should get rid of her...seriously...(ahehehe... juss giving u some... IDEAS?! lol alright... how about another update 2night!? hopeful look -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-23 ch 6,	abuseTHAT LIL ... excuse my language...ahem* wtf is wrong w/this witch!? she sayin crap about her.. mad face i hope to see a new chap up 2morrow! wink aight keep it going! -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-23 ch 5,	abuseyou don't even have to ask for the review! i love it! whop! its so cute though... the whole happy day... continue SON!!1 -MandaZ
fearphobic 2003-08-23 ch 5,	abuseWOWIE! this story is really good. 4 thumbs up
drowning angel 2003-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat a sad, but beautiful story! I had to try very hard not to cry while reading this, its beatiful.
Xi 2003-08-21 ch 4,	abuseI DID NOT FLAME YOU! I DID NOT FLAME YOU! huff huff Weird... I didn't see and semi-colons... I must not be paying attention? Oh... and I DID NOT FLAME YOU! BTW, thanks for reviewing my story.. and I wrote that story about... 2 years ago, so its horrid... oh wel, i'm continuing it regardless. One last thing, I just have to note... I DID NOT FLAME YOU! Oh and the story is going god... i'm stil reading it!! And another thing... I DID NOT FLAME YOU! oh... and one mroe thing... (this isn't about the flame thing this time...) I think i'll be adding you to my favorite authors list... since... you are such a ... cougH kind person? and if you must know, getting on my fav authors list is REALLY hard to do...ahehehe... unless you're my good friend... if you are... i'm stuck adding you... ANYWAY... I DID NOT FLAME YOU! I think that's a long review... have a nice day! -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-19 ch 3,	abuseOkay, I'll give you some... things i think you can improve on! (That didnt' sound like I was gonna flame you did it? I do seriously want to ... help you! So.. this is NOT (I repeat) NOT a flame...not to mention you should know by now, that I really am interested in this story, and I really love it... and you should know that I wouldn't stop you from writing this story since I love it so much, and I'll shut up about this part now...) Okay... your writing is kinda abrupt... on the other hand, so is mine, so you're not alone... but... of course, I suggest that you slow it down a little... (but i do like how you give the reader insite on what the character is thinking...). No it isn't unpleasant to read, don't worry, I like the plot...but you know, you should add a few details? Oh and you should use the semi-colon a few times too... that could help your writing... (eh.. i'm a lil obsessive over semi-colons... sry!)... Well, I think you should be happy enough with this review, since it took me a bunch of minutes to actaully type it up, and this is also the longest review I have ever left someone... SO! I Hope you had fun reading this thing... ( i feel like i wrote a whole chapter to my story... its crazy)... KEEP WRITING! WHEW -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-19 ch 2,	abusei'm glad you decided to continue this... you are a great writer, and i can't wait for the 3rd chapter! kep it going! -MandaZ
Xi 2003-08-18 ch 1,	abusesobs that was so touching! i loved it ... so beautiful... i'm srry.. i'm a sucker for this kinda stuff... GREAT JOB! -MandaZ

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