you have a very consistant rythm going on with everything you do. it rocks. this rocks. you rock. rock on!

awsome. you need to stop being so much better than me .. it's somewhat depressing... :)
~kitish

*takes a moment to resocket jaw*

Very good! I like the rhyming scheme in this one in particular - it really had life. I'm surprised so few people have reviewed this; it's one of your best, in my opinion.

Tenika Dargan

Great. i love it.

The rhythm on this one is really great; it flows very nicely, indeed.