yay!! you posted something!! ^_^
this really made me stop and think, but when i tried to think, anything coherent kinda fled >.<
except... i really like this, it's so deep...
well i think that i must run off now... parental units making a fuss...
love ya ~ Colie

Oh ouch.. Defintely not much about love in this.. Its a good metaphor, I liked how you used the 'chains' to show that it is holding you down..
Some irony used in this I guess.. Its quite cool though..
There's beauty and pain all in together for this piece.. Makes it all the more realistic and all the more painful all at once..
The feel and the flow of the piece is really well done up and I got to congratulate you for such a great job..
The way you fused both emotional and physical together was fantastic..
Somehow the ending was half positive and half negative, I don't know what exactly to say about this..
But anyway, it was a great piece.. I loved it..
Such pain, such emotions..
Great job, its a fantastic piece..

Keep it up..

~Shadafakup

Great poem.
I love the way you bring the chains in.
Keep writting.