REALLY REALLY REALLY CUTE!
HAHAHEHE!

Ah! Oh my God! I loved this poem! It was so simple and sweet, and the last line just made the whole thing so optimistic and warm and... *sigh*. I also loved "It's a perfect orange laughing tear"... awesome line!
Fantastic job!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?

Brief. Short, to the point(naturally), but still has a cute quality to it. A little picture of everyday life, but with flowery words. I find that words can make the most mundane things seem magical.

Short and oh-so sweet. I especially like the line "It's a perfect orange laughing tear."

beautiful. i like this. something nicely mystical about this, and yeah, candlelight really is so inspiring. good job on this.

WHO I LOVE IT
ITs REALLY GOD!
I love the rhymes!!
=)