Very chilling. You always have good conclusions. Good job.

Wow you're really really good. The words w ere just perfect. The emotion was great in this one.

P.S BOB DYLAN IS THE BEST HE. IS SO INCREDIBLY GOOD. IN FACT I'VE GOT 'LIKE A ROLLINGSTONE' IN MY HEAD!

Ian (great job on that, it was wonderful)

Oh, this is lovely! I like the twist at the end, and the description of how you still love him. Lovely work as in writing,pointythings

It makes more sense now, then it did then.D.

that's chillingly beautiful