hey there!

I love the story so far. I like your use of words. you can put any 2 words together and make it sound perfect. Excellent job!

Matt

Rewiew my story(its awesome)

Mosayio: Final Judgment

Hi,
I like your story a lot.
It is great,and I like the demon best.
So pleas go on with writing this story.
Kaiethan

I love these two, they're very sweet bishies. Hope you update soon, I'm so curious to find out how they deal with Taketori!

Hey,

I'm glad you decided to keep this up. I reaaly do like it. It's sweet, the kiss. special since Akito didn't remeber Okami. I hope you update again soon

Dead Weight

Hey,

i like this story. It's good. I like Akito. he's cool. Aw... how sweet first kiss. um anyway hope you update again soon

Than Stillman

Hey

I like it. It pretty good. I love the way that you've made it elves and demons instead of demons and angels. I wonder how that stuff's going to make Akito forget? Well i guess well find out sometime in the next chapters. I hope you can update sometime soon

Dead Weight