wow i dont know whether to hate that ending or accept it as inevitable. either way that was a really good story and i like your writing style

You should definitely do a prequel. If the things you wrote here in her memory were part of it, it could be great. And don't get discouraged... Some people rewrite a piece 50 times before they get it how they want it to be.

GACK! HOW COULD YOU KILL MY SERJ?!?!?!

*sniffles*

By the way, the start of the sequel to "In Circumspect" is posted.

I love it.

goddamn, so sad...i wanna cry for her! please do tell more about her life before this story, please!

*screams* no! serj! *cries* very good chapter, and i'd love to read about autumn before this as well as serj, pretty please with blood on top!?

those lycans are pathetic, they should be more informed. but damn, suddenly i hate devin, playing dirty by druggin' her. good job!

I love this story. The end was so sad...I hope you do decide to write Serj and Autumns backgrounds, I'd love to read them. And I don't think you should give up on this story just yet. You have a lot of creativeness. Don't give up just because it hasn't turned out the way you wanted. Keep writing!

great story

wopoetic!-Love&PEace-Durine

Do what you need to do. I've enjoyed it both times, thanks

that was so awesome, m , it reminds me of a drawing in black ink, aAH, that was so cool.

DETAIL! You need to add more detail, especially during dialogue. Also, the sentences are too choppy. Great idea, though! ^^

gr8 story. well writen but fix the ending.

Wow!... ^_^ eh heh heh...Well I really like it...I dunno what else to say...but thank you for updating ^_^