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| HeatherLee 2008-02-11 ch 18,  | abusewow i dont know whether to hate that ending or accept it as inevitable. either way that was a really good story and i like your writing style |
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2005-04-05 ch 18, | abuseYou should definitely do a prequel. If the things you wrote here in her memory were part of it, it could be great. And don't get discouraged... Some people rewrite a piece 50 times before they get it how they want it to be. |
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2005-04-05 ch 17, | abuseGACK! HOW COULD YOU KILL MY SERJ?!?!?! *sniffles* By the way, the start of the sequel to "In Circumspect" is posted. |
| LghtAngel 2005-03-04 ch 18, | abuseI love it. |
| Melissa Lea Night 2005-03-02 ch 18, | abusegoddamn, so sad...i wanna cry for her! please do tell more about her life before this story, please! |
| Melissa Lea Night 2005-03-02 ch 17, | abuse*screams* no! serj! *cries* very good chapter, and i'd love to read about autumn before this as well as serj, pretty please with blood on top!? |
| Melissa Lea Night 2005-03-02 ch 16, | abusethose lycans are pathetic, they should be more informed. but damn, suddenly i hate devin, playing dirty by druggin' her. good job! |
| KLA 2005-02-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseI love this story. The end was so sad...I hope you do decide to write Serj and Autumns backgrounds, I'd love to read them. And I don't think you should give up on this story just yet. You have a lot of creativeness. Don't give up just because it hasn't turned out the way you wanted. Keep writing! |
| evil-kenshin 2005-02-16 ch 18, | abusegreat story |
| Durine 2005-02-15 ch 18, | abusewopoetic!-Love&PEace-Durine |
| neilfatea 2005-01-24 ch 17, anon. | abuseDo what you need to do. I've enjoyed it both times, thanks |
| amaya dwyn 2005-01-23 ch 17, | abusethat was so awesome, m , it reminds me of a drawing in black ink, aAH, that was so cool. |
| cruentus orexis 2005-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseDETAIL! You need to add more detail, especially during dialogue. Also, the sentences are too choppy. Great idea, though! ^^ |
| kate molly anders 2005-01-03 ch 16, anon. | abusegr8 story. well writen but fix the ending. |
| Lady Katreina 2005-01-01 ch 16, | abuseWow!... ^_^ eh heh heh...Well I really like it...I dunno what else to say...but thank you for updating ^_^ |