Wow! I thought I had read this before but apparently I haven't...really nice, I like the last line the best. Last lines are always kinda cool cos they seal the poem if you get what I mean..haha well duh they seal it cos they end it but I think you get me! Haha...anyway, Sam, I hope you can wake up again. :'(

Small piece with few words but the emotions and thoughts are definitely there...And sleep, to dream sadly,
Or wake to reminisce.
Reminisce over lost love," I know those feelings all too well *sigh* so this is a good piece my dear, well done.


«.JêÑÑå.» -- To the world I am nobody, but to you I am your world --

I like this one, too! Very lovely! Keep up with the writing!