Aw this is soo sweet. I loved it. =]

Sweet. Ha ha, LOL. But seriously, it's not Jesus or God who condemns people because their homosexual (or bi-sexual). It's the Church. No, really.

Once again, lovely piece you wrote! Very touching and very emotional. This story touched my heart (No, seriously).

this is SUCH a great chapter! it really reminds me of the love i had for my first girlfriend. I hope they will eventually use an artificial ** or sumthing. but anyway this is a really good story and I can't WAIT to read more!

I LOVED THIS STORY!

iT WAS GREAT... YA HAD ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT AND YOU GOT ME ALL PINT UP AND ANTSY! *SEARCHES FOR GRILFRIEND*

Meanwhile, up in Heaven...

Jebus: Aw, c'mon! Can't you make an exception??G-Man: (rolls eyes) This is the millionth time you've asked me to make an exception. How many homosexual people do you WANT me to take in?Jebus: (turns into cat-man) All of them...G-Man: o_O Nani?!Jebus: But they're so cute!G-Man: (sigh) I never should've knocked Mary up...(grumbles as he lets Tam+Chris in)Jebus: Yee! ^_^ Thanks, Space-Dad!G-Man: Don't call me that! >_<

I really don't like the G-Man; he's such a dick. But he needs ragging.

This piece is beautiful. That's all i can say, it was just brilliantly beautiful. PLEASE MAKE SEQUELS!

That was amazing... it was so emotional... Why do i always cry when I read stories like this? Its so retarted... ugh, I need to go of the NC-17 kick before I get hysterical...

Very sweet, and I especially liked the part religion played in this. Lovely writing style.

this story reminds me of my first time. you are an excelent writer and i love you story. be proud of your gift, and and keep writing.

p.s i am an english teacher

This is a well written story. I would like to have seen a little more character developement, but besides that I thought it was wonderful! Keep up the good work.

This is a great idea of yours, my girlfriend and I are having similar problems with the God issue. :/ Keep going, this is a very well-written story.

That was well...beautiful. That's the only word I can really use to describe this story. It had all a little of everything you could want in a story.

? This story makes no sense! At all!! First of all, God doesn't condemn anyone, they condemn themselves! Second, if Tammy was really a christian girl, she would know God says homosexuality was a sin, and that no one is born gay, because he wouldn't create you into sin! Third, it seems she(and you?) can't understand that you can love and be intimate with someone, without sexual intercourse. I love my best friend very much, and we are intimate all the time, by sharing our true thoughts and feelings with eachother, but we never have to express that in a sinful way! It seems to me you are very twisted in your views.

to be honest, this story isn't my type. too mushy.. too blahh, too lovey dovey. it's a little too much. i was like "blah blah blah" and scrolled down to the lemon part. you mentioned fear too much :/

hey, hey, hey don't get mad. people have different preferences in movies ;)

amazing story, you should get that published properly. it was done artisically and extremely well. tahank you for giving me the opportunity to read it.