 Elisabeth 2004-07-24 . chapter 2 Very sappy...hehe...but I like sappy so it's good...I am sappy! |
 Fellow Writer 2004-04-22 . chapter 2 the sequal was just as i expected. amazing! if this was made into an actual play, it would not only entertain but help others who have the same problem as Jill. i would suggest you find a way to get this in an actual production. |
 Fellow Writer 2004-04-22 . chapter 1 i really like this one! the play movements and locations were very descriptive. the imagedry was once again well put with Jill's words. definatly worth reading the sequal. |
 MusicalMoonbeam 2004-03-07 . chapter 1I know how this goes too, kinda weird, but the feeling so hopeless that the last thing you think you can result to is suicide.. been there, done that.. no good! Great story though!
;o) |
 SexKitten6922 2003-08-19 . chapter 1hey faith,
this was awesome i enjoyed it lotz! |
 Froggie 2003-08-19 . chapter 1 You showed this play to me a while ago, I remember it, aren't you proud. It had a good message, so post the rest ASAP :) |