lol. they're so young! but it was cute anyway.

Very sweet; I really liked it.

Is this it? If not,please hurry and continue.

This is a very lovely story! You must write another chapter soon. Keep up the good work. :)

AW! CUTE!

update please. This story is so cute. I really like it. But Wendy has a better vocabulary than me and she's eleven. Makes me feel a lil small lol. Update soon.
~Meg

This is so cute! ^_^ You should continue this!

Hey...
your first chapter has a very light mood. reminds me something out of a picture perfect card.
i'm just wondering...is this just the beginning? i hope they grow up because its strange to see 11 year olds being in love. l0l.
well keep writing! this truly interests me...

taht is so sweet!
I LOVE IT!

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it's so sweet. I like it! keep up the good work!

hey, wait a minute...isn't whipstaff from the first casper movie?? if it's not, i might just be imagining things. what does wendy care about?? she's not very bright is she?? she is after all leaning over the pond. doesn't she think she's going to fall in?? but she does have good vocab...astute?? who would've thought?? wow does that seem early...at 11 she's falling for this guy. does she forget?? or does she remember but bury the memory deep within herself so as not to let the rest of the world know?? or will they actually be together later?? but i don't think that's very likely somehow...

i'm sorry if i seem harsh and bitchy about it but it's like 2 in the morning and i'm not done with all my homework yet. and snobby girls just plain irritate me...a LOT.

update asap (i really like this story, even though it might not seem like it)

Aw, that is super cute! I love it. And they're 11? Are you going to write more to this? I think you should, about what happens to them, maybe when they're a bit older, after they're friends for a long time and all that. It would be such a great story. And, just wondering, did you pick Peter and Wendy from, like, Pater Pan? That's what I thought of when I saw it. I love Peter Pan, it's my fav. Great story.