hey i didn't know you wrote poem. it's not bad, it's real. i like it...

no one reviewed this yet, so i decided to try & start a trend.
this was really good. i found a small mistake on the 10th line: Next I o to sleep...i think that's supposed to be go.
when i have more time on my hands, i'll read War of Rigel, but till then, i gotta go.
~thanx for the reviews on ColorCrayons and my story "In Danger's Path"