A dream is the continuation of reality, and reality is the end of a dream. Wow. It confuses me but I like it!

Definitely different. I love it! :)

weird, but very nicely done!

that was cute... except for it might have had more effect if the girl at the end had said "forever" instead of repeating the word day, to make it stand out more

the last two lines are complete genius, and the other lines are humorous

but dare i ask, will all the chaps have this similar format?

cause that would be interesting in it's own way

Hmm..that was weird. It seems pointless, but none the less entertaining. Is there more? Very unique way of writing, tho.

sort of weird but intersting idea...

strange grammatical structure n stuff

i liked the sand/desert thing!

wonder why you wrote this though

original beginning

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