This poem is awesome! It's so true...I've had that happen so many times. It really takes a long time 2 figure out who ur true friends are. I trust my best friend who I've only known for bout 4 months more than my other best "friend" who I've known for bout 10 years. Weird or what? Anyways, can u plz r& r sum of my work when u get a chance? Thanx! Keep writin!

wow... just wow... omg.. I love it! Are you sure your not an author under invisibility?;)

Ergh.. just one thought, some "friends" just suck lol that's all I can say. It's hard to know who to trust sometimes. "They pretend not to see reality,And I pretend not to know their game" yeah I agree with what you're saying there, some people just can't grasp real life, but then again who are we to judge what real life is? lol if they're going to be putting you down like that, just don't bother.. get rid of them, I mean there's so many people out there you could bond with that you could mean the world to them. So don't worry about these petty friends who backstab you like that.

*Jenna*

Another great one! I loved the beginning to this, very powerful, nice control of ryhme.

Good rhyming scheme. Nice work.

-Seras

I'm speechless...I don't know what to say..it was brilliant! I know friends like that too...or should I say "friends" ...eh..and itkinda sounds like me in here...I loved this poem!

As usual, amazing. It's so heartfelt, and raw, and true. And it really reflects what you're feeling, you can tell.