This is SO cool! I LOVE it! But poor butterfly... I love butterflies.

WOW!
You are SO talented!
GREAT JOB!

This is so sad... But its really pretty!
It flows well too.
I just read your bio and from what it said I think your really cool!
Of course random is good! hee hee hee!
Anyway, back to the poem... I really like it!

That was absolutely beautiful. Sad but so well-written. I loved how you compared the butterfly to a rainbow, that was very original. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

this poem was so touching(oh! OH!) Dude in dude land! keep writing!

I will never keep a butterfly in a glass jar ever again, wait, I never did before. ^-^ A really nice poem, sometimes the rhyming is a little forced but I think it comes together well in the end. Good job!

Wow! This was an amazing poem! So touching, and so sad,...but beautiful!

~CoolBeans18s

Great poem, Alliah. Hope to read more of your stuff!

This is really touching and beautiful. Great rhyming work involved and the simple story behind it is unusual. Great job!

P.S. You might want to change the spelling of 'leafs', though... :)

I loved it but *wah*
it was so sad!

wow that was powerful...

That was one of those poems that made me go 'AAWEE'. It was terrible what happened but you put it into a well written poem. Very good *lightly claps*. Keep writin'

~M.R.Glass

Ah! Bee-yoot-iful! (LOL) This poem was, ah, lovely. It moved me! I found this on the Just In page, so I'm off to read you're other poems. R/R my stuff if it pleases you.

Love and Light,
Ashley

Very descriptive, something that I tend to look for in good poetry. Great job.