That was certainly hot. I wish I had your skill for writing imtimate scenes...

Again, thanks for the reviews.

wow...that was too amazing for words, you seem to have captured every emotion and image in that short little slice. i Love it :)

ps. in response to your review of Arlequinn: I'll try to post shorter chapters - even though it is already a finished novel with average 40 words per chapter - and i'll double space the paragraphs.
As for the punctuation, it is near perfect on my microsoft word files becaus they have been edited and re-edited, but when I post them to fiction press, some punctuation doesn't show or just goes weird for some reason. What do you mean first person narrative? the whole thing IS in first person...! and there are some stream of conciosuness throughout the novel...also, the letter WAS written in italics on the original document (there's an example of punctuation that didnt come out on fictionpress)
And the story is 120 0 words long, so the start may seem directionless, but everything that happens in the start is needed later on...because the novel is long it may move slower than just a novella or short story.

Anyway, thanx alot for your review and I'll fix everything that I can :)

...I wasn't imagining anyone in particular, but I still felt like crying at the end.

SUPERB description and flawless imagery...this is, in a word, beautiful, though a simple word could hardly express the elegance and sheer heart of this piece.

That was really good. I like it. (giggles) 0_~

i haven't read your fic but bloody hell this was really intensely good. your writing really flows and the language used is incredible in the way the imagery is so vivid. i think i might give your fic a little glance...