I like how you ended on the same note as you started. I do, however, have one remark. As much as I like the fact that you gave Little Miss Perfect "soul", I'm not to sure about these few phrases: "Everyone knows she's got the perfect life. Everyone knows her life is just one big sugarcoated fantasy that every girl dreams of having. Was there a secret side to 'Miss Everything'?" They seem to diminish the effect of the story a bit, if you know what I mean, make it less about "the way things are".

*sighs* so sad and so true. wonderfully written, very truthful. :-) once again,e xcellent work!

I love how you showed the other side of the girl in the story... everyone has their problems, even if they don't show them to anyone else, and instead of just making her that typical Miss Perfect, you made her real. Good job.

wow... very nice fic dorz. I like it when u write fics, they're so down-to-earth and emotional.


Bye,
DnS

This is really good, I love how you capture how striking real and down to earth the most popular person in school can be. tee hee, lemmings suck, but they're great for plots. This was really awesome, i love it.